• lath@piefed.social
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    1 day ago

    Then I guess it’s not an improvement, but a different way of presenting it.

    Using sly suggests furtive intent. My alternative was intended as a matter-of-fact approach. The former looks to sneak as if to not get caught, the latter pursues openly as if only a natural course.